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Reborn here now without baggage- since this, my final day came round; pure, within my spirit package- I go with joy, now heaven-bound. I leave behind my weighty shell; reborn here now without baggage, and pray to God, I used it well so He now grants me safe passage. He lifts my soul, free from damage, to take me home where I belong. Reborn here now without baggage- His angels greet me with a song. And at the gate, my loved ones who before me, passed- with love, manage our long-awaited rendezvous; reborn here now without baggage. October 2, 2021 Premiere Contest: Dawn Poetry Contest Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker "Reborn here now without baggage" must be the first line and refrain

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Date: 10/12/2021 11:01:00 PM
Bravo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/19/2021 6:53:00 AM
Thanks, Donna! Sandra
Date: 10/3/2021 11:39:00 AM
Great meaning to your verse, our souls live in this shell until time God calls us. Good luck in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/19/2021 6:51:00 AM
Thanks, Eve- I appreciate your visit very supportive comments! Hugs, Sandra

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