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My Name Is Okie

My Name Is Okie


My name is Okie, and they loved me first;
   their full attention to me was disbursed.
Adopted from the shelter, they gave me
   a home where I was king, so happy, free.

And then it came one unexpected day,
   perhaps a present with which I should play.
Black fur, gold eyes, he was somewhat frisky,
   but here to stay, so they named him Nixie.

He ran around and played with my dog tail;
   had claws that gripped which I tried to curtail.
But what was worse is how they cuddled him;
   attention now for me was rather slim.

But, Nixie settled in, became my friend,
   and soon I found, with him, I liked to spend
my time now wrestling, playing hide-and-seek;
   my days grew brighter, better, week to week.

I'm part Jack Russell terrier, and he,
   a fun black cat who now, I must agree,
is my fine buddy...and at night, we lay
   on our soft couch with family...hooray!


Sandra M. Haight

~4th Place~
Premiere Contest: Personification Poem 
Of A Pet, Wild Animal or Insect
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Judged: 09/04/2018

True...about one of our daughters' family pets.
The real Okie and Nixie in the photo.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 8:23 PM
What a wonderful story of love. Very endearing, Sandra. Well done. Congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:23 PM
Thank you, Line. It is wonderful to watch the care and love they have for each other. Hugs, Sandra
Raynes Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 1:47 PM
I love this personification, reminds me so much of my dog and cat here.
Haight Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 1:08 PM
Thank you, Lewis. I am pleased that you enjoyed it! Sandra :)
Messina Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 5:27 AM
Love this, Sandra. Congrats on your win!
Haight Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 7:35 PM
Thank you very much, Charles! Sandra
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 11:21 AM
This is such a sweet poem, love the story about the friendship between the cat and dog and that it is a true story, congratulations on your win in the contest!
Haight Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:42 PM
Thank you so much, Tania, for your inspiring contest, your lovely comments, congrats, and my nice placement! Hugs, Sandra
Severo Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 4:53 PM
I love cats and dogs, this is so sweet, peace and love Aurore
Haight Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:40 PM
Thank you, Aurore, for your visit and very empathetic and uplifting comments which I appreciate so much! Sandra
Warrior Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Unconditional love, our pets are...and your poem, Sandra...cute pics as well...love & our pets...^WW^
Haight Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Thank you so much, WW, for your lovely comments. I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem and the pics! Sandra
Rasheed Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 10:28 AM
Well-done. So nice.
Haight Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:38 PM
Thank you very much, Abdur, for your visit and supportive comment! Much appreciated. Sandra
Vaso Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 4:53 PM
What a beautifully written poem, love the photo of them too!
Haight Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:03 AM
Thank you so much, Arthur, for your visit and supportive and uplifting comment! Much appreciated. Sandra :)
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