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My Name Is Okie My name is Okie, and they loved me first; their full attention to me was disbursed. Adopted from the shelter, they gave me a home where I was king, so happy, free. And then it came one unexpected day, perhaps a present with which I should play. Black fur, gold eyes, he was somewhat frisky, but here to stay, so they named him Nixie. He ran around and played with my dog tail; had claws that gripped which I tried to curtail. But what was worse is how they cuddled him; attention now for me was rather slim. But, Nixie settled in, became my friend, and soon I found, with him, I liked to spend my time now wrestling, playing hide-and-seek; my days grew brighter, better, week to week. I'm part Jack Russell terrier, and he, a fun black cat who now, I must agree, is my fine buddy...and at night, we lay on our soft couch with family...hooray! Sandra M. Haight ~4th Place~ Premiere Contest: Personification Poem Of A Pet, Wild Animal or Insect Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Judged: 09/04/2018 True...about one of our daughters' family pets. The real Okie and Nixie in the photo.

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Date: 9/28/2018 8:23:00 PM
What a wonderful story of love. Very endearing, Sandra. Well done. Congrats on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2018 2:23:00 PM
Thank you, Line. It is wonderful to watch the care and love they have for each other. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/13/2018 1:47:00 PM
I love this personification, reminds me so much of my dog and cat here.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/14/2018 1:08:00 PM
Thank you, Lewis. I am pleased that you enjoyed it! Sandra :)
Date: 9/9/2018 5:27:00 AM
Love this, Sandra. Congrats on your win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/9/2018 7:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Charles! Sandra
Date: 9/4/2018 11:21:00 AM
This is such a sweet poem, love the story about the friendship between the cat and dog and that it is a true story, congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/6/2018 8:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tania, for your inspiring contest, your lovely comments, congrats, and my nice placement! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/3/2018 4:53:00 PM
I love cats and dogs, this is so sweet, peace and love Aurore
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/6/2018 8:40:00 PM
Thank you, Aurore, for your visit and very empathetic and uplifting comments which I appreciate so much! Sandra
Date: 9/3/2018 10:42:00 AM
Unconditional love, our pets are...and your poem, Sandra...cute pics as well...love & our pets...^WW^
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/6/2018 8:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, WW, for your lovely comments. I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem and the pics! Sandra
Date: 9/3/2018 10:28:00 AM
Well-done. So nice.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/6/2018 8:38:00 PM
Thank you very much, Abdur, for your visit and supportive comment! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 9/1/2018 4:53:00 PM
What a beautifully written poem, love the photo of them too!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2018 11:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Arthur, for your visit and supportive and uplifting comment! Much appreciated. Sandra :)

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