My Name Is Lelawala-W

Where sunless river weeps and waves into the deep
 Please awake me not as I sleep very charmed sleep.
 Have many a names in different cultures world over
 Boann, Anqet, Mujaji, talaya, Lelawala, & Tsoninar

 Native American know me as Lelawala goddess of rain
 My father married me off to a king as I was fair maiden
 But my true love was He-No, the god of great thunder
 Lurking in cave under *Horseshoe Falls of Niagara water.

Paddling a canoe on the Falls, was swept off the Falls
Luckily He-No caught me while falling down the Falls.
Here happily I and He-No live in the caves of Niagara
That’s my story and now is time for me to get to action.

Watch me on my favorite horse Backahasten or Ashrays
Falling from the great heights clinging to dewy softness
Lo! My grasp gives way and feel free to fall through air
My brothers and He-No with me I no longer have fear.

The sun peeks out above, the rays pierce from top to toe
Amazed to see an array of colors forming the rainbow
My flight continues on, the wind moves me side by side
Wait no more to find what lies as I complete this ride.

The earth is near and the air feels warmer all around
I dance from leaf to leaf and fall softly to the ground
Hand in hand with buddy drops glide the wet terrain
A mighty stream I am now and no more a drop of rain.



* I have placed a picture of the Horseshoe Falls, The American side of Niagara
 on my blog photos. You can also see Picture poem on this link:
 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qI9fMJt1--
I visited the Falls in June, 2000
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Dr. Ram Mehta
Sixth place win in:
Contest: Rain, the story sponsored by Constance La France
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*Lelawala, rain goddess in Native American legend, 
Boann – goddess of the River Boyne in Irish mythology
Anqet-  was originally a water goddess from Sudan
Mujaji - South African rain goddess 
Talaya- is a Canaanite Rain-Goddess, the dew or rain personified
Tsovinar - the Armenian goddess of sea and rain
Bäckahästen - means brook horse; this was the name of a mythological 
horse in Scandinavian folklore
Ashrays – Scottish mythology - Horse
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Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 9:24 AM
Congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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January 13, 2011 at 4:17 PM
Dr. Ram, I am happy to see you won the contest with many other marvelous poems of RAin. Excellent writing, my friend!
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January 13, 2011 at 1:03 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win in Constance's Contest, Dr. Ram. Always, Annalise
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January 13, 2011 at 11:55 AM
A remarkable blend of cultures add so much magic to this poem, Dr. Ram. I love the thought of Rain finally uniting with He-No and living in the caves behind Horseshoe falls. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 11:24 AM
Nicely written and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 8:42 AM
What a wonderful story you have written about Rain, such graphic and detailed description.....I love this magical piece...and the you tube too, is mezmerizing! Well done, my friend....this is wonderful !!
Kapoor Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 8:06 AM
Thanks for your good wishes and congrats for your win also in the Rain, the Story contest Dr. Mehta. Love and best wishes...Ravindra.. Dr. Ram Mehta.
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January 13, 2011 at 3:20 AM
i'll toast to this creative, superb piece, dr. ram... CONGRATS on the high win! :) nette
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January 12, 2011 at 9:08 PM
Many Congrats Dr Ram on big win with this imaginative and informative verse. Quite a good Research work done on Rain GOD.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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January 12, 2011 at 8:31 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram for an amazing win in the Rain Story contest with this exquisite entry .. enjoy a well deserved top spot with luv my friend.. always amazing..
Mannan Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 8:01 PM
Knew this was a sure winner. Lots of congratulations for this win.
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 1:15 PM
Dr. Ram, I love how you captured the combined strength of the water and the falls by mentioning all the names of the goddessess and how you took that last stanza and grew rain from a drop to a mighty stream. A mighty powerful write! It should do very well in the contest! LUv, Andrea
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December 28, 2010 at 12:27 PM
Oh this had to be hard cause it was such a great read.I really enjoyed this.Thanks for the kind comment.Good luck to you to.Teresa
Wilkins Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 6:12 AM
Great story, I love the mythological side to it, well written! Thank you for your comment Crystal~x~
Kapoor Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 4:09 AM
You have weaved a wonderful story with all the details of mythological background. Great write Dr.Mehta. My good wishes for your entry and thank you for your appreciation of my Rain, The Story. Love and best wishes for a Happy New Year....Ravindra...Dr. Ram Mehta.
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December 27, 2010 at 10:42 PM
A beautiful vivid story of rain you have penned Dr.Mehta.
Mannan Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 7:59 PM
This is awesome poetry Dr. Ram. All the very best for the contest.
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December 27, 2010 at 6:33 PM
This is wonderful Dr Ram, A saga of the rain Gods, especially welcome here in western Australia, we are deep in to the worst drought ever, baking in 110 plus degrees. Harry
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December 27, 2010 at 4:46 PM
Such an interesting story about the goddess of the rain..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Much effort that you made to do this one..Sara
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December 27, 2010 at 3:41 PM
Hello Dr. Mehta, This is remarkable! So well done, I love it! Most entertaining and a lovely poem. I think it is a winner........................ As Always, Shar
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December 27, 2010 at 2:44 PM
Hello to you Dr Ram. You once again amaze me with your knowledge. Even the Irish Boann which I did not know. The best of luck in the contest with this great piece. Especially the last line,' A mighty stream I am now and no more a drop of rain'. Eamon
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