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When I’m up and about, my feelings on high, My name means I’m happy and glad, But when I’m down and out, my feelings on low, My name means I’m sombre and sad. And when I’m frustrated with irk, my mood is all vexed, My name means a whole lot of rile, Then, when I’m stimulated with life, my mood is engaged, and My name means stop, laugh and smile. My name, to me, means all sorts of things, Depending on my emotional hue. And folks say my name in different tones, From thrilled to jubilant to blue. But, most important of all, to the one that I love, My name makes her smile, makes her glow. My name means I’m hers, her very best friend, My name means I’m her lover, her beau. Written 12th January 2017 for Silent Ones contest "What's in a name" Awarded 2nd place

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Date: 1/19/2017 5:22:00 PM
Awww!!! This is so sweet Lewis!! Great job and congratulations!!! Big hugs. Deb
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Date: 1/17/2017 10:07:00 AM
Excellent poem, Lewis. I love the creativity of expanding, then exploring the depth of one's name. Such rich textures of emotions used. Brilliant and inspired poetry! I'm not in touch w/contests, but I wish you the best as well. Love and more love to you and yours.
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Date: 1/12/2017 11:10:00 AM
I love your take on the contest Lewis, best wishes...
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