Marcus Crane Poet Choka

My Name ? ..Exaggerated

my name ..sounds so anxious

known by many ..exaggerated ..

a hunter ..trying to survive

now look through my eyes 

wonder why ? is feeding a crime ?

orca is good ...killer whale ... a lie

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Raul Moreno January 29, 2010 at 1:12 PM The last line sums the question up. It's just feeding. NIce work...Raul

Audrey Haick January 28, 2010 at 8:44 PM Yes, the orca is to the killer whale as the lion is to the antelope! Great write, Marco. Peace, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown January 28, 2010 at 10:19 AM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Marco. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick January 28, 2010 at 4:18 AM They look like a gentle giant with their coloring and the grace with which they move through the water. I am glad that you chose this topic. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara