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''My Name''

 
My name is too old fashioned Daddy, I want a new name, please! When I was quite young I hated my name, it's too long and old sounding, I complained that I wanted a fun name. One day Dad told me about his long dead sister, a great writer- like me, I said in a whisper. And was quite beautiful also, he said, and you have her eyes and long raven hair. I loved her so much and gave you her name. My name is too old fashioned Daddy, I want a new name, please! I wondered why I was like her so much, as she was long dead before I was born. Dad showed me a picture and it was true. I asked my Daddy, if I could keep that picture, he told me all about her quest for adventure. So, I decided to embrace my name, somehow her spirit dwells inside of me, and it still lives in my soul and writing. My name is too old fashioned Daddy, I want a new name, please! ___________________________ January 10, 2017 Poetry/Ballad/"M Name" Copyright Protected, ID 17-864-656-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, What's In A Name? sponsor, Silent One Second Place
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Inman Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 7:29 AM
A lovely poem BW. I very much like your name.
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January 19, 2017 at 5:42 PM
Congratulations "C"!! Well done. Big Hugggs. Deb
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January 19, 2017 at 1:58 PM
loved this one Broken Wings :) YOou have a beautiful name and pen name...congrats :)-luloo
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