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This is dedicated to my adopted granddaughter/daughter, Phoenix Raine

"Phoenix Raine"
My fabulous firebird
You burn up with rage
And fall into a pile of hot ashes
Then your tears "Raine" down to put them out
You are renewed
Fresh and ready to share yourself again

During your moontimes
Hormones turn you into a dragon
Protecting your treasures
Your heart, spirit and emotions
With roaring and flames
But that passes too
And once again you share your treasure
With all who come near you

You are a fairy
Flitting around on wings of kindness
Helping everyone
Looking after babies to give mothers a break
Always there for everyone
Your smile lights the world
And your inner beauty shines in your face
You are my mythological child
And I love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/20/2023 1:07:00 AM
Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem about me! - Phoenix :)
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Date: 10/20/2023 3:59:00 AM
Love you baby. xxx

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