Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

My Muse Resides

I see in creases no others found
where souls seem low 
and duty bound

where sparkle waits
in dreamlike states

amid anxious eyes
here her smile lies

I see in darkness under guise of moon
where beauty moves
no heart's immune

where kindness roams
alive in poems

held deep inside
my muse resides

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Chris Green January 3, 2017 at 9:21 AM So very beautiful my friend.

Darren White January 3, 2017 at 3:35 AM TIM! This is so beautiful! 7 and fave no doubt. Your muse is one of the best muses I've ever met.

Charmaine Chircop January 3, 2017 at 3:14 AM Oh..I'm speechless...This is so very beautiful and comforting...It makes the museless muse feel special and pampered at times when she 's confused and at her lowest.Lucky muse to be treated so kindly.. A Fave and a 10.

Eileen Manassian January 3, 2017 at 1:48 AM And there she will stay forever. Lovely piece, Tim.

Lim'Rik Flats January 2, 2017 at 9:26 PM I truly believe it! My muse lives under a rock;-)

Daniel Turner January 2, 2017 at 8:20 PM I like it when she pops her head out, Tim. Thought provoking write:)

Arthur Vaso January 2, 2017 at 7:07 PM That is both poetry and love and compassion combined!

Ilene Bauer January 2, 2017 at 6:33 PM ooh - i really like this one, tim, especially the ending...

Gail Foster January 2, 2017 at 4:52 PM Like this very much. Always interested to read poems about the muse. Good rhythms. Like the repetition of 'I see'. Doing a fair bit of that repeating thing myself at present. All the best to you.

Doug Vinson January 2, 2017 at 4:34 PM Quicksilvery magic, Tim. : )

Gary Bateman January 2, 2017 at 4:31 PM Hello Tim, Dropping by to check out your latest listing. This one is a really nice rhyme write. The Poetry Muse is indeed a most nimble spirit in every possible creative situation. Excellent Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon January 2, 2017 at 4:07 PM Sigh! I breathe deep as I internalise the beautiful lines. What a genius you are! A 7, no doubt.