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My Muse Once Sleeping Is Awake

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A birdsong floats upon the breeze And flutters softly through the trees What music once my words did make My muse once sleeping is awake! My words with wings that used to fly Have fallen from a somber sky A gust of wind is all it'll take My muse once sleeping is awake! It left without a word to say My skies once blue, have turned to gray Then thunder roars, I feel the shake My muse once sleeping is awake!! I wander blindly through a mist Trying to find the words I missed Yet through the clouds a light will break My muse once sleeping is awake! 7-10-19 Writing Challenge 1, July 2019 - Repeating Refrain Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Kurt Ravidas

Date: 7/31/2019 10:18:00 AM

Oh, I see you have two muses, both awake! Watch out, Joseph. I'm affraid, a rough time awaits you) Greatly penned. Pls, accept my belated congrats.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/24/2019 6:15:00 AM

wow, so glad this is a winner, beautiful poetry...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/21/2019 3:49:00 PM

Joseph, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/21/2019 1:39:00 PM

Back with congrats Joseph - just knew there would be a win, a great poem by a great poet. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Constance La France

Date: 7/19/2019 9:29:00 AM

Joseph, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge with this wonderful write. I think all poets and writers have felt the pain of losing their muse at some time and you wrote of it beautifully,

Joseph May
Date: 7/19/2019 2:33:00 PM

Thank you for my placement DH

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/19/2019 8:01:00 AM

Oh, this is excellent poetry, love it Joseph. congrats on your win...

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/19/2019 1:11:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned,.

Charles Messina

Date: 7/18/2019 3:31:00 PM

Great write Joseph. Besides the fact that this is very well written...it flows so well indeed. Congratulations on your win in the contest. All the best, Charlie

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/18/2019 1:26:00 PM

Hi Joseph, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/17/2019 10:03:00 PM

Your muse has wings, as words tumble along the page. Congratulations Joseph, on this win. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 7/17/2019 10:29:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Joseph, I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem. John

Georgia Kereopa

Date: 7/17/2019 5:29:00 AM

Joseph, lovely poem from beginning to end.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/16/2019 8:25:00 PM

Joseph really enjoyed this! Congrats on your win!;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2019 6:43:00 PM

oh good, I see you got second place CONGRATULATIONS

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2019 6:39:00 PM

Love it, Joseph, It flows well and it has a beautiful message. I am sure you must have been on the winners' list but I am seeing this just looking at your page of poetry. Sure hope Congrats are in order!

Sandra Adams

Date: 7/16/2019 6:25:00 PM

very nicely penned, it flows very smooth! :) hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/16/2019 8:52:00 AM

Well done, I can’t imagine your muse has had any more than a catnap.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/15/2019 3:58:00 PM

Hi Joseph: A beautiful take off on the muse! Good luck on the contest!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/15/2019 12:01:00 AM

Wonderful Joseph! Good luck in the contest...this seems a winner to me

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/14/2019 10:07:00 PM

Lovely rhythm and flow to this entry, Joseph. Good luck in the contest, Gershon

Silent One

Date: 7/14/2019 5:07:00 AM

Your muse seems very much alive to me...

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/12/2019 11:59:00 PM

Your words were never really asleep, they have been drifting in the clouds. Perhaps daydreaming. :) I like this very much. I wish to place it in my favorites. Your muse has come out to play. :) Brandy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/12/2019 4:00:00 PM

joseph, you and your muse are twin souls!...lovely poem which uplifts!..huggs

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/12/2019 10:41:00 AM

Hi Joseph, Your title alone caught my attention. You've a penned a good entry for the contest. The content and the imagery is lovely. I wish you the best the best of luck in in the contest:-) Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/12/2019 8:46:00 AM

I love, love, LOVE this poem Joseph. I hope to see it in First place my friend. It is going into my FAVES! : ) xxoo