My Mountain

Oh,when I look at you great one
I get shivers down my spine,
Your represent such a hold on life
How I ache to begin that climb.
Each step is for a year of life
Getting stronger every day,
Pushing throught the obstacles
Not allowing anything in the way.
Getting closer to the top
What a great and wonderous feat,
Feeling young and so alive
A joyous feeling that can't be beat.
All these thoughts are flowing
As I look at you great one,
Going to prepare for my journey now
Climbing you will be such fun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sandy Ivy's "Viewing Life" contest Christine. Love Carol
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December 3, 2012 at 7:39 PM
Congrats Christine.....Seren
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December 3, 2012 at 6:13 PM
C. :-) CONGRATULATIONS ON A POEM WELL DONE..... ALWAYS & FOREVER~ linda
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December 3, 2012 at 4:29 PM
Congrats :-) Sandy
Palmer Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 11:09 PM
wonderful write Christine,I have a tree planted on top of the mountain,when you get there check it out it's called the Tree of Life,LOL
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November 28, 2012 at 7:01 PM
Christine very nice poem. Connie
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November 28, 2012 at 7:12 PM
Thank you Connie. Christine
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