My Mother's Impression

I often did not understand
The meaning of Footprints in the sand
“You have big shoes to fill”
I felt that so much it made me ill
Last June when I lost my mother
The hurt was worse than any other
Her footprints remain everywhere
They are an imprint in the air
I can hear her in my head
If I choose not to make my bed
When I feel like giving up
and only see an empty cup
Her footprints appear on the floor 
She guides me just like before
            05/02/2021

Written for “Footprints” Old or New for a Prize Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 9:22 AM
What a beautiful tribute to your mom Evelyn. It has a flowing quality in the rhyming couplets. I still hear my mother's voice and find myself repeating her sayings like "There's always room at the head of the line." Her footprint. Your poem is so relatable for so many. Congratulations on your win.
Alex Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations!
Seeker Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 8:30 AM
Beautiful! Congrats on your win, Evelyn
Swartz Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Thank you
Devonshire Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Your mother's footprints on your heart and soul will be with you forever. It's wonderful to know that she is still guiding you, Evelyn. There were many extraordinary poems in this contest. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! And thank you for supporting the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
Devonshire Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 10:39 AM
My Mom's been gone for most of my life now, but I know she is still guiding me. It's kind of you to read the other entries. Contestants always appreciate feedback.
Swartz Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Thank you for the encouraging comment. The contest did inspire alot of good poems. I enjoyed reading the work of fellow poets.
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