My Mothers Face

Her love is more than a small child’s first word 
My mother’s heart and love, one in a chord 
She lived all my childhood dreams in adore 
With wisdom and love allowed them to soar

When breakers of her life beat at the door, 
she made beaches of pain instead of war 
Her life taught her to value and treasure  
people’s friendship, respect, this her measure  

Her face reflects her life in soft wrinkles, 
a path by His hand with life love sprinkles 
Her wrinkles life events now in the past 
She’s thankful and now wrapped in peace at last

Her husband in heaven, and we are sad 
She shares the face of love, waiting for dad

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Below the original I wrote for my mother

God se Gesig  

Liefde is meer as n klein kinder woord
Liefde en my ma se hart in akoord
Sy het my kinder droome elk deurleef
en met wysheid en liefde hul laat sweef

Toe die lewens branders slaan teen haar deur
maak sy strande plaas van rotse van seer
Die lewe haar geleer om te begeer,
verhoudings met mense, diep vas in eer

Haar gesig spieel haar lewe in ploeie 
Pad gestap aan Sy hand in die mooie
Plooi gebeure los sy in verlede, 
dankbaar vir als toegedraai in vrede 

Haar hart in die hemel maar, gelukkig, 
deel sy nog God se gesig, geduldig 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/13/2017 12:52:00 PM
Such a blessing, mother's love. Your love for her shines through in this sonnet James.
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Date: 2/23/2017 3:19:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words Jean! And so true
Date: 2/8/2017 5:32:00 PM
Beautiful and heart felt this really touched me. Your mother would be so proud. Great job my friend. God Bless and a 7 from me. JB
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Date: 2/8/2017 10:38:00 PM
Thank you so very much Judy
Date: 2/2/2017 1:37:00 PM
I like it all James but the third stanza is my favorite. Mother's are P R I T T Y cool:)
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Date: 2/2/2017 10:59:00 PM
Mothers are the best! Thanks for your visit my friend!
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