My Mother's Face

Today’s glance in the mirror
Made me wish I could erase
The image that looked back at me,
Which was my mother’s face.

I do not mean her younger self,
So 1940’s vamp,
But more a senior version
Which bore aging’s glaring stamp.

It’s something we don’t want to see.
I think we often cling
To visions of ourselves so filled
With all that youth can bring.

But years unfold and take a toll
And grant us no protection
From what the mirror offers us – 
A reason for reflection.

We can’t quite help who we become.
The years won’t cut us slack;
But when I pass a mirror hence,
I hope myself looks back.

Ilene Bauer (http://primetimerhyme.blogspot.com)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bangalee Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 3:20 AM
great feelings- The years won’t cut us slack;/But when I pass a mirror hence,/ I hope myself looks back./// beautiful poem
Mcguire Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 10:18 PM
Great poem Ilene!
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 6:33 AM
Thank you for posting and allowing us to enter into your world of poetry today. The diversity of our poets and their poetry here at PoetrySoup is astounding. It was my pleasure to read your poetry today Irene. Love, Carol
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