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My Mother's Christmas Angel

She sat grandly on our Christmas tree hair of shining spun gold her buttons sparkling dress of white lace an Angelic smile. Her wings a shimmering silver hue We watched each year softly being placed with loving care atop the tree. My mother standing back telling Dad, move her just to the left Phil, no, now right dear, now forward. Perfect! The years have now come and gone Mom and Dad have passed away the Angel lay in her box now her dress dirty and worn hair frizzy & unkempt buttons gone astray. Memories are made and then stored just like Mom's beautiful Angel her radiance never forgotten shining so very bright each Christmas.
A Christmas Gift Memory Poetry Contest Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley 12/4/2021

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Date: 12/27/2021 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. You express the joy in the memories you hold dear so beautifully! Blessings, Paulette
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 1/3/2022 10:52:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Paulette! Just home now and am behind, as always! Blessings, Ken
Date: 12/26/2021 9:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Ken . Love the way you laid out your poem.
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 1/3/2022 10:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve!
Date: 12/26/2021 3:09:00 AM
Great tribute to mother. One of the best poems on mother. Congratulations!
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 1/3/2022 10:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind comment!
Date: 12/24/2021 9:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Ken!
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 1/3/2022 10:54:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Mark! Much appreciated!
Date: 12/24/2021 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win. This is such a touching and beautiful work of art. Thank you for entering your poem in the contest, it truly touched my heart. I'm sure your beautiful mother is smiling from heaven on your precious Christmas poem. I hope you will continue to write. You are gifted. Merry Christmas! May you and yours be blessed with a healthy and wonderful new year!
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 1/3/2022 10:57:00 AM
Many thanks my friend. Mother was a lovely lady and I can only hope this little poem does her justice with her love of Christmas!! I hope you had a grand holiday, and Happy New Year to you and yours with continued good health and prosperity for 2022!!

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