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My Mother the Car

(“Blue Egg in Red Sea”, 2020, original oil)

My mother was a car and I a lawnmower
My mother was a spatula and I a spoon
My mother was a can of beans and I a fart
My mother was always one step ahead 
And I tried at every step to keep up
But in the end it was I who simply floated away

(8/22/26)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 11:47 PM
A wonderfully surreal and affectionate tribute, full of unexpected pairings and playful humour. The final image of floating away adds a gentle, wistful note beneath the whimsy.
Moore Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 6:53 AM
Thank you Alison. Sometimes I wish all my poems were whimsical… I also wish PS had a category for “absurd”.
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