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My Mother Star

Clouds descended at the pinch of midnight sketching a faded portrait that I saw form; my arms perched high to the blood- red sky and the woman that bore me appeared above. I searched for her like a lifetime ; gathering records through ream of files : we connected thrice, her twilight dying, that in a monotone, I still ask why she gave me away in deep reflection. My mother held me, her almond eyes lonely, yet her voice clear in forgiveness , granting our nights with bits of sentiment. How I missed that chance of popsicle rides or childhood doodles…quite late for us to mark breakthrough undone, where dreams could have been fondled in a nourishing way. Every now and then, come late evening when I see my real mother, a lone lady star, this heart bleeds at the thought that I never knew her enough …and like an abandoned waif, I cry, asking heaven that one day, when my time arrives let there be two bright stars playing on coastlines, under rooftops, in the sky. .................. Contest of Silent One, Long Lost Family 8.18.2016
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Kimathi Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Congrats Nette, for your well, deserved top placement with this piece!! ;-)
Chansarkar Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 1:33 PM
This is so emotional and beautiful Nette!Congrats!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 11:18 PM
Touching and I like the picture with it. Congrats on your win! Sunita
Krampe Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Beautiful and touching, Nette. Congratulations.
Richards Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 8:22 PM
Even your beautiful title, makes my heart feel the love and loss. Beautiful work as always, Nette. :)
Scars Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 8:01 PM
Nette, very well written lovely lady, remarkably great...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Wonderful write Nette, loved the last four lines...
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 1:55 PM
- One heartbreaking beautiful poem, Nette - Deep feelings - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Beautifully written, Nette, So very sad but also a refreshing twinge of hope at the end. Good luck in contest.
Roper Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 11:56 AM
So breathe taking, Nette, "How I missed that chance of popsicle rides or childhood doodles…quite late for us, let there be two bright stars playing " so beautiful. a 10.... Hugs Eve and good luck in the contest
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