My Mother

Mother gives us birth And she gives us faith, To fight all obstacles Which are like Octopus tentacles, She is so cool As she helps us to use a tool.

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Skat A

Date: 4/20/2016 12:03:00 AM

Kruthi Katta, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 4/14/2016 12:30:00 PM

Congrat. A very touching poem reminding me of my childhood when mother gave me as gift a book of poetry. I never was able to write a good verse to caught this feeling like you. I still try.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/14/2016 10:02:00 AM

Nice to see this up twice, Kruthi,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@