My Mother

She was the frailest of creatures ever
Pretty and white, delicate as a rose
Possessed sharp memory and very clever
A kind heart and gentle frown above her nose
Never strict, would always let go
Busy with her writing and household chores
Hated needle work and didn’t know how to sew
Would always love a picnic outdoors
Never thought too highly of her
Until the day she fell sick
Said softly typically sweet and demure
Of life’s deep mystery and funny trick
‘I know I am weak’, said mommy dear
In health and character since beginning
But always kept this prayer short and clear
Never to give my child my ending
I cried for days when she said this
Loving her fragility more than ever
Her true love shone through this pure bliss
That she bestowed on her daughter with cheer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 5:37 AM
Congratulations on your win Tahera in the "My Parent" contest by Francine Roberts. Love, Carol
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January 4, 2011 at 3:36 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
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January 4, 2011 at 6:24 AM
Hi Tahera. Congratulations on your result in the contest with this great piece. A thoroughly deserved success. Good luck to you. Eamon
Mehta Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 5:19 AM
Contratulations on this HM win in the contest of Francine, Tahera
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January 4, 2011 at 3:49 AM
with my special congrats, tahera! :) nette
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January 3, 2011 at 8:00 PM
Beautiful tribute Tahera; congrats on your HM! Lay
Johnson Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 7:04 PM
LThis is a lovely dedication to your mother. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:54 PM
Congrats Tahera on your HM in My Parent contest with this awesome write and entry dear friend... enjoy your special honor tonight with luv..
Roberts Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:40 PM
thank you for supporting my contest Tahera and congrats on your HM in the contest
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