My Mother

My mother didn’t cook too well
And neither did she bake.
If you’d assume she loved to clean,
That would be a mistake.

She didn’t drive, she didn’t work
But she was always there.
If comfort was required, well,
She had the time to spare.  

If something needed fixing,
She’s the one who’d man the tools
And raising us, it’s she who made us
Follow all the rules.

She was athletic, playing tennis
When she had the chance
And at a party, she would be
The first to start to dance.

She loved her games and puzzles,
Playing mah jongg every week
And did crosswords in the paper,
With an always-finish streak.

My mom’s been gone for years, yet on
Her birthday I recall 
That, despite her flaws, without her
I would not be here at all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kingston Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 8:38 PM
She sounds as though she was wonderfully fun and smart. Although her "flaws" are certainly minimal we certainly wouldn't be human without them. Your first stanza makes me think a little of myself. :)
Kaufman Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 7:01 AM
Hi Ilene, It is so nice to remember the positive traits of our mothers and what gifts they gave us. It's sounds like your mom had a lot of positive energy for life and was a good listener, wonderful character strengths. Thanks for sharing.
Borke Avatar
January 29, 2024 at 6:01 AM
I have traits in common with your mother, and you are so similar to my mother.
Rolland Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 12:42 AM
that is so nice, your mother was an angel, we know that later, thanks .for the touching portrait
Greenhough Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 9:03 PM
That was wonderful. Your mother would be proud of you and your writing abilities. Your homespun journeys are treasures.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 6:51 PM
A well-balanced portrait of your mom. Hugs
Allison Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 2:58 PM
aww what a lovely tribute - i bake and cook but detest cleaning lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 1:23 PM
Happy memories of your mother Ilene, She sounded like the life and soul of the party. Tom
M  Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 10:35 AM
An absolute honest and very beautiful birthday tribute to your mum Ilene! Not all mums have to bake, clean etc….love and happiness comes in so many ways and a child knows when they are loved, safe and the number one priority in their parents lives! Your mum sounded amazing and good fun! Debx
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