Jack Ellison Poet Narrative

My Most Intimate Dream

Reality has surpassed my most intimate dream
In intensity, in passion, in love
No need ever to dream again
Want to bask in the glow from above
To drink in the pleasures of the mind
Never wanting this feeling to desert me
To vanish, to slip away
To know this passion will never desert me
Is the ultimate joy of my heart
To feel the intensity of your love
To know that we never will part

My most intimate dream is you



© Jack Ellison 2014

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Carol Eastman September 6, 2014 at 11:15 AM Dragon is touched to have such a fan! True the penguins adore him and think him a God... But Dragons' greatest love is to have people write about him in print... Fortunately, he's never disapointed... as he thinks every thing is about him... Giggle... It does make him happy to believe that way... So who am I to spoil such happiness... Besides, I've tried... and he just doesn't listen... Go figure... Jack Ellison September 7, 2014 at 6:21 AM I didn't mention his name but he KNEW!!! LOL XOX

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 5, 2014 at 12:25 PM When u r my most intimate dream Jack,, why on earth should I dream ?? Splendid emotion n a great pen indeed! Jack Ellison September 5, 2014 at 1:17 PM What a nice thing to say my dear Upma! Loving hugs from this old guy! XOX

Eileen Manassian September 5, 2014 at 8:14 AM Kenny!!! YOU ARE AMAZING!!! Oh dear me! Oh my! Hugs to you, Kenny! THIS POEM IS ABSOLUTELY PHENOMINAL! :) Faving it! Jack Ellison September 5, 2014 at 8:48 AM Holy Crap Betty Boop! You're making feel tingly all over!!!!! LOL It's a well known fact, YOU'RE ARE AMAZING TOO!!!! Always so passionate, and so supportive! Love you to bits! It's OK, Cathie loves you too! Kenny XOXOXOXOX

Toquyen Harrell September 5, 2014 at 6:10 AM Lol, flattering will get you somewhere :) Nice confession, Jack lol. Have a great day :) Jack Ellison September 5, 2014 at 8:49 AM What a sly devil I am, eh!!! LOL Loving hugs, Jack XOXOX