My Mortal Wound

Traitor thoughts return 
  again and again 
  to the blackened pool 
  that has become breeding ground 
  for my memories of you. 

Like fingertips to a deep gash 
  testing for tenderness, 
  waiting for healing, 
  impatiently scratching at scabs and scars.  

Loosing angry blood 
  from freshly clawed skin;
  pricking nettles of pain 
  into my defeated heart. 

Ripe with infection; never to heal 
  you have become 
  ...my mortal wound.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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March 13, 2011 at 1:30 PM
Very expressive and emotive work..Congratulations..Sara
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March 9, 2011 at 3:11 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Kelly. Love Carol
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February 21, 2011 at 3:37 PM
Congrats Kelly on being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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February 21, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Kelly. Love, Carol
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