My Moment

My moment has become  my torment
My spotlight  a cell
In which i stand shocked
Complied and squeezed
With the  past,present
And the "what's next?"
All spinning  me like a top
Would it ever stop?


Its  my moment and it feels great to know
I am at the bottom of it.
Everything seems  to be limited
Expect  my power and straight
Which is wild and savage
Under  my control

My moment!  My moment!
It feels great  to be here
Good  to know that i am on  the  broken bridge
That can never fall.
Though i tremble and fall
I land on  my success
Raising up  to its express
And looking back that i was here


I am in  my moment
The  stage is set
This moment i will never forget
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Devnath  Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 2:53 AM
I agree with the comment of our lovely poet Elizabeth Wesley. Loved always, bl
Thomas Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 5:26 PM
We all have our moments. Thanks for sharing.
Goller Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 3:02 PM
That's a heartfelt expressed poem. Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Erich
Wesley Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 9:38 AM
When you are at the bottom, there is no plac3e to go but up; we need to make the trip worthwhile! :) Love where this takes me.
Baity Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 1:09 PM
This is great Prince... thanks for sharing...smiles.. Chiquita
Butterfly Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 5:30 AM
Wow, wonderful Prince, I have also been in that moment and thanks for visiting my poetry
Squyres Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 6:56 PM
Nicely done....once the moment has passed, it is no longer viable...Seize it !! Enjoyed !!
Kearley Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 3:44 PM
Sieze the moment! ha,ha... I like the write! It's great! Flow~with the moment~~~ And thanks for stopping by...As long as I see your name you can count on me to read your great writes.. :-)
Austin Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 2:55 PM
Yes! I wrote a poem once about some special moments which life is full of. In your case the moment is now, and I love it. daver
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 12:05 PM
Well written Prince. - oxox Anne-Lise
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