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My Mom

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My mom was really cynosure in life. Now, real star above a true guide for this girl so very, very special in life. She had a brilliance that shined if, I have just a bit of my mother. Mom, was not famous, or notable ever but, she was so kind, loved by everyone who, was lucky to meet her in her short life. At her funeral many people stood in line for hours in the rain they waited to say a goodbye to this lady. My mother is my inspiration, my shining star immortal. ___________________________ June 23, 2016 Poetry/Shape/Triangle/My Mom Copyright Protected, ID 16-803-666-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Cynosure sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron Fifth Place

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Date: 7/1/2016 9:05:00 PM
Congratulations.....let me know how you transfer that shape....
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Date: 7/1/2016 6:05:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on the placement of the contest
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Date: 6/25/2016 9:44:00 AM
Lovely BW.
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Date: 6/24/2016 2:45:00 PM
- Deep missed - Beautiful triangle poem, B.W. - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/23/2016 6:16:00 PM
How did you do that????Wow... Sorry about your mom...
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