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My Modern Woman

my 21st century woman, my modern woman, You have been first of the born free one year younger but already more worldly than me, traditionalist, but still liberal so you're a left wing and a right wing which makes it easier for you to fly above all of us cultivated to learn what needs to be done and what interests You. webster can't define You. Your persona, Your character, Your mind or what have You You've transcended time by epitomising all that's renaissance and immortalised beauty with You're infinite morality You find the time to do it all, so You less time is just timeless, like You're mouth and You're tongue that does so much, Enough to make me fall in love while still timely enough to captivate the world, so Your hourglass figure is just a symbol of how much you can get done within that frame You. have changed my perspective on everything but I'm just one of the lucky few, the view of Your frame has altered my frame in mind to regard time more precious because not everyone can spend everyday with one of the greats now... You got me eating Bar-One's to try & give me a 25 hour day, with You speaking of Great, You've made me dust my thesaurus to find synonyms for how great you are, but You're more than these words describe so i'd like to write my own: ambitious - Yusrah beauty - Yusrah charming - Yusrah daring - Yusrah enigmatic - Yusrah fantastic - Yusrah gorgeous - Yusrah humorous - Yusrah infinite - Yusrah jubilant - Yusrah knowledgeable - Yusrah limitless - Yusrah magnetic - Yusrah neoteric - Yusrah opulent - Yusrah passionate - Yusrah quaint - Yusrah real - Yusrah seductive - Yusrah talented - Yusrah universal - Yusrah valiant - Yusrah witty - Yusrah xenial - Yusrah youthful - Yusrah zealous - Yusrah blue - Yusrah I threw in that last one simply because I knew only you'd get it. And I know, Yusrah: Ease. Fa inna ma'al 'usri yusra. Inna ma'al 'usri yusra. Verily, along with every difficulty comes ease. Verily, along with every difficulty comes ease. and You are the ease for so many, You do so much with so little and make a breeze of any hardship You face. You make my life harder as Your man but make me stronger as a man. so i'd be the first to admit, There's an idiom that needs to be changed, because for every great man, an even greater woman stands beside him.

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Date: 8/16/2013 10:49:00 PM
Jaime, , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *"
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Date: 8/15/2013 2:38:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Jamie ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Jamie Brown
Date: 8/15/2013 9:41:00 AM
Hey Anne-Lise Thanks you for the welcome
Date: 8/14/2013 4:09:00 PM
Hi Jamie, a lovely ending. we must all keep a change in life... thanks for the ending message on your poem, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@....
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Jamie Brown
Date: 8/15/2013 9:42:00 AM
Hi Linda Thank you for your kind words and being the first to welcome me.

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