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My Mistake

my mistake was talking to my mom because she set's me off like a tripped off bomb to think my words would change her mind to be the nice and loving kind but she is mean, mean to me through her heart of stone she will never see the best kind of daughter i can truly be i just want her to want me back because a self esteem is what i lack i just want to change her view on life so her words don't slice through my heart like a knife to change her heart of stone to a heart of love so our hearts can fly free with the souls of a dove so i can see her for the good person she could someday be the only person that might just be like me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/31/2009 3:15:00 PM
Nice Rhyme Lesa. Good Job...Raul
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Date: 8/30/2009 2:26:00 PM
Here it is Sunday and the begining of a new week is upon us. And August is leaving us way to soon. I am enjoying reading such excellent poems today and am happy to see your poetry among them Lesa. May your pen forever flow. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2009 1:52:00 PM
Interesting feelings toward your mother. Talk talk talk. Lines of communication. Sara
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