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My Missing Part

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It's our 8 year wedding Anniversary tomorrow so I wrote this as a gift to my amazing husband Steve

On a crisp winter gust of wind he blew in. Rousing me to wakefulness as he gently touched my skin Just out of the blue As if he knew My existence had grown dim And I needed him And now at last I could see The face to the angel of my fantasies He rescued me Just like a dream I never believed would be Released from hurtful negativity He set me free It was like looking into a mirror I saw his soul of shimmer A duplicate of mine Destined to be combined A placid giant in my eyes He was the best of the human race Secure in his arms of protection I was greatly adored and with that safe With a patient understanding Simply kind and not demanding Bringing out the best in me Inspiring words of poetry He whipped up a storm of passion in my heart And with tenderness completed me For he was my missing part

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/15/2019 11:04:00 PM

Elaine, This is a wonderful Anniversary Rhyme. And so nice to celebrate eight with the special kindness and love of one. You both rock the human race in this poem. -Richard

Elaine Perrin
Date: 4/28/2020 3:22:00 AM

Thanks Richard :-) x

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/13/2019 7:34:00 AM

What a wonderful expression of your love and passion for your husband. Blessings Rick.

Elaine Perrin
Date: 11/13/2019 8:17:00 AM

Thank you Rick :-) x

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/31/2019 2:48:00 PM

A knockout Poem Panagiota

Elaine Perrin
Date: 11/13/2019 4:20:00 AM

Thanks lovely :-) x

Midnight Aurora

Date: 10/27/2019 4:41:00 PM

A very sweet and romantic tribute to your beloved. Love makes all the tribulations of life so much easier. Beautiful write.

Elaine Perrin
Date: 11/13/2019 4:22:00 AM

Thank you so much lovely :-) x

Ann Foster

Date: 10/27/2019 4:00:00 PM

Well written indeed. Romance and true love... Ann

Elaine Perrin
Date: 11/13/2019 4:24:00 AM

Thank you Ann x

John Gondolf

Date: 10/22/2019 7:58:00 AM

Awww, this is a sweet beautiful tribute to your husband and your marriage, Elaine, I'm sure he was thrilled with this gift. Happy anniversary to you and Steve and may a lifetime of blessings be yours. All the best me dear friend. Hugs, John

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/23/2019 4:24:00 AM

Thank you so much from the both of us John :-) x

Damian Keady

Date: 10/21/2019 5:11:00 PM

Happy anniversary to you both! Best wishes from me... and such a lovely write and tribute to hubby Steve.. have a lovely day... DAMO x

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/21/2019 7:24:00 PM

Thanks so much DAMO :-) x

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/21/2019 1:20:00 PM

Such a lovely anniversary piece Elaine, many congratulations to Steve and yourself. I loved reading this with nice rhyme and insightful thought. We make our 30th anniversary next April, don't know how to celebrate it. Have a blessed day, Gordon

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/21/2019 2:08:00 PM

Thank you so much Gordon. I hope you both have a fabulous 30th anniversary however you decide to celebrate it :-) x

Paul Callus

Date: 10/21/2019 8:47:00 AM

This delightful poem is a show of gratitude, respect, and admiration...but above all of love! Congratulations on your wedding Anniversary!! ~ Regards // paul

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/21/2019 9:00:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely comment Paul :-) x

Chris Green

Date: 10/21/2019 7:54:00 AM

Simply beautiful, an amazing poetic dedication to the one you love. Happy Anniversary Elaine. Congrats on 8 years.

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/21/2019 8:59:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris :-) x

Bobby May

Date: 10/21/2019 6:53:00 AM

This is beautiful Elaine!!

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/21/2019 7:01:00 AM

Thank you Bobby :-) x