L Milton Hankins Poet Rhyme

My Minichu

For the life of me, I
Cannot conceive of writing structured form like this
I will cry.

So, why try it
Clearly, it is worth a big kiss
My hit.

Not yet
A single miss
Get

For the life of me, I ...
Clearly, it is worth a big kiss
Get!

FIRST PLACE WINNER
Written October 30, 2020
"Let's Minichu on Writing" Contest
Sponsored by Mohan Chutani

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Linda Alice Fowler October 31, 2020 at 6:22 AM Hi LMilton. Congratulations on the win! Linda L Milton Hankins October 31, 2020 at 8:10 PM Thanks, Linda. I appreciate your comment on my poem "My Minichu."

Mohan Chutani October 31, 2020 at 3:48 AM LMILTON, congrats for your placement and giving me your lovely feedback on Minichu format. I think you did not attempt any of my previous contests yet you got it on target Best. Mohan. L Milton Hankins October 31, 2020 at 8:09 PM Hi Mohan, if you read some of my poetry, you will see that I'm not big on various forms. I generally allow the subject matter or the theme of the poem to dictate the form. I was not familiar with the Minichu format, so decided to see if I could write one. I guess I succeeded. Thanks for placing it high up in the winner's list. I was proud to win something!