My Mind's Candlelight

"What is life but a secession of preludes to unwritten words"
                   Quote..." Constance La France "


Memories contain my mind's candlelight
as death will come like a setting sun
My life's final breath becomes a long night

In its dim-lit shades, I'll find what was right
the years I know have already begun
Memories contain my mind's candlelight

All that is left are the poems I will write
that show a life lived I could not outrun
My life's final breath becomes a long night

My days and nights turn before they take flight
with my written words of passion undone
My memories contain my mind's candlelight

When I die they'll find poems to recite
even if they are read-only for fun
My life's final breath becomes a long night

To those I love, I will  leave my requite
as I've shared my years, life's circle has spun
Memories contain my mind's candlelight
My life's final breath becomes a long night


11/15/22
contest Writing Challenge...V-forms
Quote # 3 Writing
sponsor Constance La France

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Date: 12/1/2022 3:46:00 PM
Congratulations, Frederick!
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Date: 11/30/2022 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/28/2022 9:36:00 AM
Frederic, a beautiful Villanelle poem, I love it and the music. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge V Forms inspired by my quote. Well done, blessings !
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Date: 11/23/2022 8:33:00 PM
"When I die they'll find poems to recite even if they are read-only for fun" - Beautiful.
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Date: 11/15/2022 7:26:00 PM
A wonderful villanelle, Frederic, with a touch of sadness...
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