My Mind's Candlelight



Memories contain my mind's candlelight
As death will come like a setting sun
My life's final breath becomes a long night

In its dim-lit shades, I'll find what was right
The years I know have already begun
Memories contain my mind's candlelight

All that is left are the poems I will write
that show a life lived I could not outrun
My life's final breath becomes a long night

My days and nights turn before they take flight
With my written words of passion undone
My memories contain my mind's candlelight

When I die, they'll find poems to recite
even if they are read-only for fun
My life's final breath becomes a long night

To those I love, I will  leave my requite
As I've shared my years, life's circle has spun
Memories contain my mind's candlelight
My life's final breath becomes a long night
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Canerdy Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 8:06 AM
Frederic, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this lovely, moving poem. Janice
May Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 7:14 AM
Congrats on your win in my contest, Very nicely done
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 3:46 PM
Congratulations, Frederick!
Kendrick Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
La France Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 9:36 AM
Frederic, a beautiful Villanelle poem, I love it and the music. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge V Forms inspired by my quote. Well done, blessings !
Alex Avatar
November 23, 2022 at 8:33 PM
"When I die they'll find poems to recite even if they are read-only for fun" - Beautiful.
Daniel Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 7:26 PM
A wonderful villanelle, Frederic, with a touch of sadness...
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