My Mind Was a Mess

When the clock struck seven, I must confess,
my mind was little more than a mess.
"Listen for my word in your conscious stream", 
I said in the language of my dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Godwin Avatar
February 1, 2026 at 5:41 AM
I'm straight trippin boo. Does anybody really know what time it is? Do consciousnesses really stream, or does the head just move forward? I enjoyed your mess.
Crandall Avatar
February 1, 2026 at 9:38 AM
Haha, I wish my consciousness bobbed along on a clear mountain stream, but it takes the bus and usually shows up at the bus stop 30 seconds after the bus has departed.
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