My Mind State

You look at me and you laugh
making me feel insecure
calling me names, stupid you say 

A fool I was to let you breath again
but you made the mistake of thinking
I felt sorry for myself

When your "friends" left you alone
you knew you were helpless, take your last breath
Now you are 6feet under, friend

Were you really worth it it?, Guess not
But there's no turning back
WHAT'S DONE IS DONE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
February 7, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
A  Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 8:13 PM
well expressed.......SKAT
Allison Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 4:58 PM
Powerfully written ... Having been bullied myself I find this very sad Godfrey:-( hugs jan
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