My Mind Lost Somewhere Between Your Eyes and the Moon

something about you pulls me in.
throws me a rope when i'm under,
makes the hollow bits swell.
 
i love you til the sun turns blue.
 
like dew on grass,
let me drip down
into your roots.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 30, 2015 at 11:07 AM
I like your style here ! You showed a very clear and vivid picture. Interesting expressions. I especially like the line: "i love you til the sun turns blue." Also, the last two lines are very interesting. I can't know for sure what you had in mind while writing that but I interpreted it in my own way. I wish some people dripped down into my roots.
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