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My Mind is Out of Order

my mind is a jumbled-up mess, it thinks it’s a game of chess, with pawns in a line, and knights in a bind, it’s chaos, but i must confess. it ponders like cats in the night, chasing things just out of sight, with dreams in a chase, and thoughts all misplaced, it’s nonsense, but it feels just right. so if you catch me in a tangle, as my scattered thoughts wrangle and mangle, just laugh with delight, and join in the flight, where logic and silliness dangle.

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Date: 2/8/2025 6:31:00 AM
"it’s a game of chess, with pawns in a line, and knights in a bind" - Grand comparison.
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Date: 1/21/2025 8:26:00 PM
At times, the brain goes on vacstion. Silliness is a great stress reliever. This is an enjoyable limerick.
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Date: 1/14/2025 2:53:00 PM
I am all for logic and silliness and i do love the limerick form Alesia, a clever trio of poems:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/13/2025 5:19:00 PM
Nice string of limericks that follow the title perfectly. And each one is so separate from the others, though with similar meanings nonetheless.
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