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My Mind Is Empty

my mind is empty sinking and shrinking i am lacking fulfillment thinking and thinking of you i was once a superstar aching with desire for every moment of life all the colors i embraced emphatically one day you just up and changed your mind and disappeared like a ghost spooked by progression the suddenness of it all left me in a forest full of lost....i knew nobody and and i had not one friend but you now i sit in an empty room of sadness and gloom....and wonder why....as my mind becomes emptier than abandonment in sheer darkness

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Date: 2/18/2015 2:23:00 PM
Hey Marty, such a longing and hearts desire for one who chose to go. But cheer up because you have so much to yet accomplish and with a gift of writing such as yours there is so much to look forward to. If you get a free moment, check out my poem "How Do You Say Goodbye". hugs to you dear Marty. Be Blessed, Neva
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