My Mind

My mind is a weave of Inspiration Legally bound by the commitment To creatively explode Never before have I looked at yesterday And thought that today was worth witnessing Because tomorrow will bring the fruit of it all Hope! My mind is a knot of troubled freedom Sensitive and waiting to burst open To enjoy the light Yet to live and let live To be or not to be Is not a question but a realization Breathe! My mind is a tongue tight vision Waiting for that platform To raise all hell Yet to acknowledge To plant the seed That will set it free Live! .

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Lancelot Hill

Date: 12/10/2011 1:11:00 PM

efriam my man I have never read something this captivating. love your work

Damona Efraim
Date: 12/13/2011 6:21:00 AM

I'm actually a woman. Thank you though, I appreciate that very much. :-)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/2/2011 3:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Damona. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

Damona Efraim
Date: 8/5/2011 3:40:00 AM

Wow! Thanks you so much!