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My Mellow Day

Bees buzzing low where gardens grow; lovely lilies there in pretty poses. Tulips too! Oh, Heaven’s hue! Wind wafts through trees as a calm cool breeze. Dawn’s debut; Nature’s new! Flowers’ fragrance; rosy romance. My mellow day, let springtide stay. Nov. 10, 2021 for A Lovely Day Poetry Contest Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/4/2022 12:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful day/write. Sounds so peaceful. Have a blessed day/weekend...........

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/2/2022 2:09:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea on the high placing win of your beautiful poem!I could almost smell the flowers <3 Thank you for entering the contest, have a blessed day! :)

Constance La France

Date: 11/30/2021 9:43:00 AM

Andrea, beautiful poem and a big congratulations on your win in Joseph's Alliterisen contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 11/30/2021 2:40:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win with this write dear Ria...I loved the beautiful imagery created from the beginning till the end...Hugs...~ Ani

Charles Messina

Date: 11/29/2021 5:09:00 PM

Lovely, Andrea. Congrats on your well-deserved winning poem. Hugs Charlie

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/29/2021 10:52:00 AM

Congratulations on making the winning list, Andrea.

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/29/2021 10:22:00 AM

Andrea, a perfectly simple execution with an exquisite taste my friend! It's like a pretty girl in her Sunday's best! My compliments truly, Aloha!

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2021 7:05:00 AM

I love the flow of this wonderful write Andrea, Congrats on your win

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 11/14/2021 6:07:00 AM

This form seems to be interesting and I wish to give it a try..."Heaven's hue"...loved it ...nice rhymes and alliteration...Best wishes and hugs Ria...~ Ani

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 11/14/2021 2:40:00 AM

You rose well to the challenge Andrea. I was not feeling creative so skipped this prompt..Well done...Delice

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/12/2021 10:30:00 PM

Superbly composed, Andrea:) should place high:) I found the rhyming difficult along with the alliteration and syllable count but somehow managed to complete the challenge:)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/12/2021 6:39:00 AM

Very beautiful, awesome imagery - good luck in Josephs contest, he always has such awesome contests, he is bound to love this! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/11/2021 11:20:00 AM

There is such a joyful melody to this; it reads like a melody Andrea

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/11/2021 4:46:00 AM

A lovely scene! I find myself in a Spring garden.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/10/2021 3:13:00 PM

About as mellow as it gets, Andrea. Simply delightful. ~ Bathed in sunlight, Mellow Yellow

John Lawless

Date: 11/10/2021 9:36:00 AM

Nicely done Andrea......I shall have to give this form a try

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/10/2021 8:43:00 AM

I would find this contest too complicated for me. The best is that it seems no rhyme is involved. Loved the imagery though. Hugs.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/10/2021 7:45:00 AM

Ah, this gave me a lift this morning. Well-done, my friend. Best wishes in Joseph's contest.

Judy Ball

Date: 11/10/2021 7:29:00 AM

Lovely Andreaa,. Makes me think of how it feels sitting in my garden swing in summer. I'm already missing it. Loved it. God Bless and Good Luck in the contest. JB

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/10/2021 7:29:00 AM

I love this and Spring. Beautifully done. God bless you, Andrea. Love, Gina

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/10/2021 7:20:00 AM

Spring can't come quick enough Andrea, you captured the mellow day well in your verse. Tom

Mike Bayles

Date: 11/10/2021 7:19:00 AM

I enjoyed this poem, Andrea, the rhyme and alliteration. It's a fun poem.