Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

My Mellow Day

Bees buzzing low where gardens grow;
lovely lilies there in pretty poses.
Tulips too! Oh, Heaven’s hue!
Wind wafts through trees as a calm cool breeze.
Dawn’s debut; Nature’s new!
Flowers’ fragrance; rosy romance.
My mellow day, let springtide stay.

Nov. 10, 2021
for A Lovely Day Poetry Contest
Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley

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Paula Goldsmith March 4, 2022 at 12:39 PM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful day/write. Sounds so peaceful. Have a blessed day/weekend...........

Bj Legros Kelley March 2, 2022 at 2:09 PM Congratulations Andrea on the high placing win of your beautiful poem!I could almost smell the flowers <3 Thank you for entering the contest, have a blessed day! :)

Constance La France November 30, 2021 at 9:43 AM Andrea, beautiful poem and a big congratulations on your win in Joseph's Alliterisen contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Anitha Jayasankar November 30, 2021 at 2:40 AM Back with congratulations on your win with this write dear Ria...I loved the beautiful imagery created from the beginning till the end...Hugs...~ Ani

Charles Messina November 29, 2021 at 5:09 PM Lovely, Andrea. Congrats on your well-deserved winning poem. Hugs Charlie

Jenna Logan November 29, 2021 at 10:52 AM Congratulations on making the winning list, Andrea.

William Kelii Kekaula November 29, 2021 at 10:22 AM Andrea, a perfectly simple execution with an exquisite taste my friend! It's like a pretty girl in her Sunday's best! My compliments truly, Aloha!

Joseph May November 29, 2021 at 7:05 AM I love the flow of this wonderful write Andrea, Congrats on your win

Anitha Jayasankar November 14, 2021 at 6:07 AM This form seems to be interesting and I wish to give it a try..."Heaven's hue"...loved it ...nice rhymes and alliteration...Best wishes and hugs Ria...~ Ani

Delice Arleen Skelly November 14, 2021 at 2:40 AM You rose well to the challenge Andrea. I was not feeling creative so skipped this prompt..Well done...Delice

Joanna Daniel November 12, 2021 at 10:30 PM Superbly composed, Andrea:) should place high:) I found the rhyming difficult along with the alliteration and syllable count but somehow managed to complete the challenge:)

Jennifer Proxenos November 12, 2021 at 6:39 AM Very beautiful, awesome imagery - good luck in Josephs contest, he always has such awesome contests, he is bound to love this! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Caren Krutsinger November 11, 2021 at 11:20 AM There is such a joyful melody to this; it reads like a melody Andrea

Kim Rodrigues November 11, 2021 at 4:46 AM A lovely scene! I find myself in a Spring garden.

Gershon Wolf November 10, 2021 at 3:13 PM About as mellow as it gets, Andrea. Simply delightful. ~ Bathed in sunlight, Mellow Yellow

John Lawless November 10, 2021 at 9:36 AM Nicely done Andrea......I shall have to give this form a try

Victor Buhagiar November 10, 2021 at 8:43 AM I would find this contest too complicated for me. The best is that it seems no rhyme is involved. Loved the imagery though. Hugs.

L Milton Hankins November 10, 2021 at 7:45 AM Ah, this gave me a lift this morning. Well-done, my friend. Best wishes in Joseph's contest.

Regina Mcintosh November 10, 2021 at 7:29 AM I love this and Spring. Beautifully done. God bless you, Andrea. Love, Gina

Judy Ball November 10, 2021 at 7:29 AM Lovely Andreaa,. Makes me think of how it feels sitting in my garden swing in summer. I'm already missing it. Loved it. God Bless and Good Luck in the contest. JB

Tom Cunningham November 10, 2021 at 7:20 AM Spring can't come quick enough Andrea, you captured the mellow day well in your verse. Tom

Mike Bayles November 10, 2021 at 7:19 AM I enjoyed this poem, Andrea, the rhyme and alliteration. It's a fun poem.