My Love's Sweet Repose

Your eyes have taken me deep within
The essence of your soul
Showing me love that I've never known
A love you emote so well- 
You have breathed life back into my soul
Rescuing me from the Erebus that I had fallen into
A place in which I could not have escaped from alone
You are the embodiment of everything
I have longed and waited for
You are my love's sweet repose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tsiluma Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 11:39 PM
Beautifully done Jan! I love how you've brought out what the love has managed to achieve. Very well written!
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December 24, 2013 at 4:23 AM
Jan--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
Melugin Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 6:22 AM
Jan, Nice sweet rest of love.. You said it well! chuck
Sergi Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 6:01 PM
Jan very moving and deep poem nice work
Clemons Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 8:18 PM
Great poem Jan. Deep expression of romance in few words, but yet just as thought provoking. An enjoyable piece overall. Check out some of mine. Peace.
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December 2, 2013 at 11:32 AM
Enjoyed reading your romantic lines.Sara
Cannon Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 11:38 AM
Thank you Sara for your kind words...Happy holidays to you and yours.Jan
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November 30, 2013 at 5:02 PM
- A lovely written poem,Jan. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Cannon Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 11:44 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise
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