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My Love's Sweet Repose

Your eyes have taken me deep within The essence of your soul Showing me love that I've never known A love you emote so well- You have breathed life back into my soul Rescuing me from the Erebus that I had fallen into A place in which I could not have escaped from alone You are the embodiment of everything I have longed and waited for You are my love's sweet repose

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Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 12/30/2013 11:39:00 PM

Beautifully done Jan! I love how you've brought out what the love has managed to achieve. Very well written!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 4:23:00 AM

Jan--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Chuck Melugin

Date: 12/19/2013 6:22:00 AM

Jan, Nice sweet rest of love.. You said it well! chuck

Joseph Sergi

Date: 12/11/2013 6:01:00 PM

Jan very moving and deep poem nice work

Jiril Clemons

Date: 12/8/2013 8:18:00 PM

Great poem Jan. Deep expression of romance in few words, but yet just as thought provoking. An enjoyable piece overall. Check out some of mine. Peace.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/2/2013 11:32:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your romantic lines.Sara

Jan Cannon
Date: 12/2/2013 11:38:00 AM

Thank you Sara for your kind words...Happy holidays to you and yours.Jan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/30/2013 5:02:00 PM

- A lovely written poem,Jan. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Cannon
Date: 12/2/2013 11:44:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise