Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Senryu

My Lover's Eyes (Senryu Series)

1   Alluring : mystic                                4   Mesmerizing  eyes  
      Light brown : almost hazel eyes              Caressing my Heart with LOVE               
      Always  full of LOVE                               Knowing they own me

2   Eyes with flecks of green                    5   My Barbara Jean
     Immersing my Heart and Soul                 Your light brown eyes filled with LOVE
      In Eternal LOVE                                     Capture my Heartbeat
        
3   Soporific eyes                                    6   Together our eyes
     Singing  a sweet lullaby                           Entwine the arc of Rainbows
     The song Forever LOVE                           Brown-green and blue gray

       This is for YOU ; Barbara Jean Gorelick ; with all my Heart , with all my LOVE
       Submitted for Pen to Face, Face to Pen Contest  Sponsered by Sami Al-khalili

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Laura Breidenthal February 15, 2012 at 11:16 PM Beautiful! Brown hazel eyes are really cool. Always, Laura

Rima Anil.Naik May 14, 2009 at 10:05 PM Superb write.Thanks for commenting on my poem.

Carolyn Devonshire May 13, 2009 at 1:43 AM Gazing into Barbara's eyes, you find so much beauty, HG. Lovely dedication to one of our most beloved writers!

L'Nass Shango May 12, 2009 at 8:00 AM A rich weave of imagination, a sweet sculpture of words ... all the best in the contest. Great tribute to your soul.

James Marshall Goff May 10, 2009 at 9:07 AM HG... just carried away on a cloud! sweet!!! Jim

Brian Strand May 10, 2009 at 12:38 AM Nice one HG especially no 6.Rgds Brian

Ernilando Tugaff May 7, 2009 at 11:48 PM I agree with brother Ruben, one is enough. This is loaded. Anyway, I enjoyed it. This a manifestaion of a true love. Good luck in the contest. I have also one featured poem this week. Ernilando

Trudy Diane Rider May 7, 2009 at 8:54 AM Such an adoring tribute to your love. Good luck in the contest with this beautiful poem HG! & thank you for your outspoken comments on my poem also. They are always welcomed! Thank you! ~Trudy~

Charmaine Chircop May 6, 2009 at 3:24 PM this is bombastic-excellent infact its going to my favs--charma

Sharon Winter May 5, 2009 at 6:19 AM Oh wow, wow, wow!!! Blown away by your beautiful, outstanding, loving, adoring poetry! And dedicated to one of my most favorite poetic friends! I feel BIG WINNER right here! Bravo dearest brother. Good luck! Lots of love, Shar xoxo

Raul Moreno May 4, 2009 at 11:50 PM Beautiful work HG, and best of luck in the contest...Raul

Laurie Ginn May 4, 2009 at 7:45 PM You go BG, such a beautiful tribute from a man that knows how to love. Great job HG, I smiled to the end.

Barbara Gorelick May 4, 2009 at 6:40 PM HG..Your going to win, hands down..I cant wait to " pay up"..see your mail. BG

Edward Orozco May 4, 2009 at 6:39 PM Great! Great write! Good luck on the contest! - eduardo