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My Lover

My lover speaks fire laughs smoke she is madness spilled from my imagination My lover with raven hair of wooded fire midsummer night kisses of heated lightning My lover with zebra thighs breasts of clouds hourglass waist lips of champagne ace of hearts My lover mother of pearl eyes of blue siren sings for me no one ever hears yesterday and tomorrow My lover Monday through Friday swims in the ocean that I prepare for her comes and goes to the sky...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/11/2015 3:53:00 PM
Lol! What a very lovely write here my friend. I love how this was constructed and the vivid imagery it depicts. Excellent write KEN. Please take a look at the fourth stanza I think you want to write yesterday.......brilliant one.................A.M.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/11/2015 6:21:00 PM
thank you Afolabi for visiting and pointing out that typo!
Date: 11/5/2015 12:07:00 AM
a lovely write Ken, enjoyed.. ~Luv Linda
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/5/2015 4:01:00 PM
Thank you Linda for a lovely visit!
Date: 11/1/2015 4:18:00 PM
really cool images of your lover!Sounds amazing.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/1/2015 5:36:00 PM
Thank you Andrea! Kind of a surreal write..
Date: 11/1/2015 12:52:00 AM
AMAZING, LOVING THE POEM
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/1/2015 10:07:00 AM
thank You!

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