Sylvia Coulstock Poet Rhyme

My Love-My Valentine

I want you to hold me in your arms,

So I feel your body close to mine.

Touch my lips with a thousand kisses,

So I experience the taste of your love divine.

To melt my heart with a burning passion

That yearns for you with such intense desire,

So that I softly yield in sweet surrender

As we become one in love's eternal fire.

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David Moore February 23, 2012 at 12:58 PM Very nice Sylvia

James Rasmusson February 23, 2012 at 6:13 AM Glad you like my Dr. "Jekyll". It's done in the 'diamante' form. Give it a try. It's fun. This valentine baby (yes, I was born on the big day) likes your Valentine poem above. ~Jim MeanderthalMan

Wilma Neels February 22, 2012 at 1:02 PM June, this is a beauty, lovely feel to it.. What a nice surprise to see you here today.. How are you doing? Love Wilma

Jesslynn Chamberson February 22, 2012 at 6:36 AM I'm guessing this poem is in the 'Story of a Valentine' contest? If it is I would be VERY surprised if this is not at least in the top 3!! This poem is amazing, and I loved reading it SOOOO much! It's really great, couldn't be better written! -AddieLynn