My Lovely Sister

We are a family conisisting of six,Billy,Shirl,Karen,Lynne,Myself and Trace
                    i would say that Lynne stands out,so proud you have done well with 
                    no hairs or grace,
                    your warm personality,kindness caring are just a few of your charms
                    you will go to any lengths to see see people come to no harm

                    Your advice is accurate and reassuringly strong
                    and if taken onboard you will see  where is the wrong
                    i can see you are doting nanny of Erin and Owen
                    and the love u create can blatantly see it flowing

                   well my  sis , i will wind down your little rhyme
                    although i know i could stretch it,for many a line
                   and keep words flying,like a turtle dove
                   so i will wrap this up for you and send it off with love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 25, 2011 at 5:44 AM
It's just life, there must be a favorite in a family, the most beloved. I love it that you express Lynne's uniqueness in a lovely rhyme.
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