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My Lovely Sister

We are a family conisisting of six,Billy,Shirl,Karen,Lynne,Myself and Trace i would say that Lynne stands out,so proud you have done well with no hairs or grace, your warm personality,kindness caring are just a few of your charms you will go to any lengths to see see people come to no harm Your advice is accurate and reassuringly strong and if taken onboard you will see where is the wrong i can see you are doting nanny of Erin and Owen and the love u create can blatantly see it flowing well my sis , i will wind down your little rhyme although i know i could stretch it,for many a line and keep words flying,like a turtle dove so i will wrap this up for you and send it off with love

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Date: 6/25/2011 5:44:00 AM
It's just life, there must be a favorite in a family, the most beloved. I love it that you express Lynne's uniqueness in a lovely rhyme.
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