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December. 29.2023
Anacreontic Couplet
 
 
December..29.2023
 Anacreontic Couplet Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Silent One

 

My Lovely Blossoms

In well set pots in a row Sweet flowers in clusters grow A sight, pleasing to behold As their petals they unfold A treat to adoring eyes A haunt frequented by bees Flashing colors in the sun, My heart and soul they have won. Flowers always make me glad What charm, to nature, they add Butterflies fly like flowers They dance in the day light hours They too greatly cheer my eyes They're flowers' lovely allies
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Legros Kelley Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 9:31 PM
This is sweet, uplifting and painted a glorious image in my mind. I love flower gardens as well. I hope you are blessed with many flowers and all that is good in the coming months of 2024 Valsa, happy new year <3
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 9:17 AM
I hope this made the winner list. It was for silent one, right?
George Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 10:56 PM
No Andrea, it didn't enter the winner's list ! Discretions and tastes differ.
Nicholsen Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 12:20 PM
Lovely flowers flow enjoyed reading your work.
Nicholsen Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 12:20 PM
Lovely flowers flow enjoyed reading your work.
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 10:47 AM
Butterflies fly like flowers. Such a cute line that was. Nicely done and we can feel your love of flowers
Hind Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 5:55 PM
Lovely. Best of luck to your flowers!
Narain Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 11:20 AM
You guys are lucky to have spring like mild winter. I have seen potted flower gardens in India, they are just beautiful. I am glad you are enjoying, we have to wait for another three months. Happy New Year.
George Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 9:47 AM
How flowery dear friend, I love them both, butterflies and flowers, they have such beautiful colours and are so calm and attractive. You so well Valsa. Compliments of the season to you dear.
McBride  Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 9:02 AM
There flowers lovely allies, this is truly beautiful poem to gain from, love all of it : ). May your flowers grow beautiful as the Spirit God has placed within you: )
McBride  Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 9:05 AM
??Luke? ?12:27?-?28? ?KJVAAE?? [27] Consider the lilies how they grow: they toil not, they spin not; and yet I say unto you, that Solomon in all his glory was not arrayed like one of these. [28] If then God so clothe the grass, which is today in the field, and tomorrow is cast into the oven; how much more will he clothe you, O ye of little Faith
Kendrick Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 4:07 AM
How springy and cheery is this one. I enjoyed reading it. Flowers add such a nice touch to a home. I have seen a contest mentioned with this anacreontic in it so I need to look it up. Yours reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Cunningham Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 2:57 AM
A delight to see in your garden Valsa. Good luck in the contest and a very happy new year to you. Tom
Empress Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 2:42 AM
Oh my gosh! This is so beautiful made me really breathless! Your rhymes and imagery and flow of your lines truly left me in awe captivated! You really have a way with painting imagery. And i think silent one too will love this, as you’ve done a very garden ish ambience here with your poetic word weaving. “ Butterflies fly like flowers” i just love that line! “ Flashing colors in the sun,“ wow! So delicate and artistic! And so magical, i can literally see through your words. BOL. FAVE this is
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