My Love the Stump

I arrived from work late
And there it was near the backyard gate
My favourite tree now a stump
My heart felt like a lump
Brutally cut off this being
So vital for my wellbeing
Made me sit and cry
Beneath the clear blue sky
I lowered my head on the stump
And felt its heart go thump
Knew my love still lived
The stump, the tree has outlived
With reverence I kissed its bark
And knew it could be used to make an ark
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 9:42 PM
enjoyed your witty write!
Neels Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 7:03 AM
A beautiful write on your beloved stump Tahera, I love the ending especially :) Wilma
Devonshire Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 7:23 AM
What a creative poem, Tahera! I guess the old trunk could have been carved into a canoe as well as an ark. I do hate to see our leafy friends being chopped down. Best wishes for success in the contest with this terrific entry. Love, Carolyn
Cwiak Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 7:15 AM
Wonderful write. The pains of finding the tree gone come through in such simple words. Good luck in the contest. Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.
Bloomsfield Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 4:25 AM
lovely poem indeed!Celene!
Hilliker Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 3:27 AM
Nicely written poem on a hard topic. Good luck in the contest.
Bagnall Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 5:27 AM
nicely rhymed, pretty little tale, good luck in the contest
Brown Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Tahera. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 8:54 PM
Tahera. I LOVE This . YOu did such a great job with the topic. soupmail!
Mehta Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 3:46 PM
Very nice constructive thoughts on the use of the stump you have expressed, Tahera
Gorelick Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 7:07 AM
I think this is a hard theme..but you did a great job..Im still thinking..and thinking..and thinking..lol BG
Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 6:40 AM
Sad to lose a favorite landmark as a beautiful old tree...They have character just like people..Great theme and presentation...Sara
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