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My Love the Stump

I arrived from work late And there it was near the backyard gate My favourite tree now a stump My heart felt like a lump Brutally cut off this being So vital for my wellbeing Made me sit and cry Beneath the clear blue sky I lowered my head on the stump And felt its heart go thump Knew my love still lived The stump, the tree has outlived With reverence I kissed its bark And knew it could be used to make an ark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/22/2010 9:42:00 PM
enjoyed your witty write!
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Date: 10/21/2010 7:03:00 AM
A beautiful write on your beloved stump Tahera, I love the ending especially :) Wilma
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:23:00 AM
What a creative poem, Tahera! I guess the old trunk could have been carved into a canoe as well as an ark. I do hate to see our leafy friends being chopped down. Best wishes for success in the contest with this terrific entry. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:15:00 AM
Wonderful write. The pains of finding the tree gone come through in such simple words. Good luck in the contest. Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.
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Date: 10/18/2010 4:25:00 AM
lovely poem indeed!Celene!
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Date: 10/18/2010 3:27:00 AM
Nicely written poem on a hard topic. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/15/2010 5:27:00 AM
nicely rhymed, pretty little tale, good luck in the contest
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Date: 10/15/2010 5:26:00 AM
Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Tahera. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2010 8:54:00 PM
Tahera. I LOVE This . YOu did such a great job with the topic. soupmail!
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Date: 10/14/2010 3:46:00 PM
Very nice constructive thoughts on the use of the stump you have expressed, Tahera
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Date: 10/14/2010 7:07:00 AM
I think this is a hard theme..but you did a great job..Im still thinking..and thinking..and thinking..lol BG
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Date: 10/14/2010 6:40:00 AM
Sad to lose a favorite landmark as a beautiful old tree...They have character just like people..Great theme and presentation...Sara
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