Ravi Sathasivam Poet Light Verse

My Love Story

My love story.......

Where do I start my love story
What you want to know about my love story
How can I tell about my sad love story
When I start to tell then my tears roll down
She was there always for me like an angel
I could hold her in my arm
I could hug her with my heart
I could kiss her tenderly
She gave her unconditional love with passion
She was the world to me
I have walked with her every moment and 
the mountains and oceans opened their heart for us
What a wonderful day when I was with her
Those days were the best days of my life
But till the Satan separated me from her
I did not know that her sickness will end her life
She cannot see the tears in my eyes
neither the pain in my heart that cries for her everyday
My love story ends into an incomplete story.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Cherie Thomas October 25, 2013 at 7:23 AM Ravi this is emotionally touching piece. Your heart is poured into each line of the love you have inside. Peace.&.Blessings always, affectionately Cherie.

Bukang Liwayway October 18, 2013 at 12:13 PM my heart bleed while reading this love story of yours friend Ravi. Is this for real? thanks for sharing..Good day Ravi Sathasivam October 23, 2013 at 11:13 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Delysia Hendricks October 16, 2013 at 1:19 PM A touching story well-penned, Ravi. This is good poetry, my friend. Licia :-) Ravi Sathasivam October 23, 2013 at 11:13 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Cherl Dunn October 14, 2013 at 10:39 AM WOW this is a very special write and emotionally written. I loved this write I could feel your love story through your words. this is what poetry is suppose to be about passion. Thank you also for your comments on my poems. Ravi Sathasivam October 23, 2013 at 11:13 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Harry Horsman October 14, 2013 at 7:40 AM truly emotional is this Ravi, wonderfully penned and a joy to read..... Ravi Sathasivam October 23, 2013 at 11:14 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Len Gasun October 14, 2013 at 1:38 AM A very beautiful & lovely sad poem this is my dear friend Ravi. I love it and so enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing! Thanks as well for your precious time stopping by my work. Have a wonderful day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Ravi Sathasivam October 23, 2013 at 11:14 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Skat A October 13, 2013 at 8:07 PM Ravi, deep........... and sad... thank you for the kind visit.... SKAT Ravi Sathasivam October 23, 2013 at 11:14 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Lucilla Carrillo October 13, 2013 at 6:45 PM This is so sad - yet it is a story of love. Your love is already sealed here and beyound. God will bless you always. Thankis for sharing this story with us.... Lucilla Ravi Sathasivam October 23, 2013 at 11:14 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Sara Kendrick October 13, 2013 at 6:39 PM I can feel the emotion within the lines..It is really hard to lose the one we love to a terrible illness and death..Great work about the topic..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Ravi Sathasivam October 23, 2013 at 11:14 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Sandra Adams October 13, 2013 at 9:23 AM such a poignant poem, straight from the heart and the sadness lingers...but I believe she can see you and feel your pain....hugs Ravi Sathasivam October 23, 2013 at 11:15 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich October 13, 2013 at 8:58 AM So sad, Ravi. but it was a beautiful story and the story will have a continuation in heaven! Ravi Sathasivam October 23, 2013 at 11:15 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen October 13, 2013 at 8:12 AM - My heart cries for this sad "love story" - Touching written with beautiful memories of happiness that died. - Have a nice Sunday Ravi, all the best to you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Ravi Sathasivam October 13, 2013 at 8:17 AM Thanks for your comment Anne. I always look for your comment because it gives my pen more strength. Appreciated. Hugs and kisses