My Love Haiku

My love not demure
Your eyes no deep limpid pools
There burns fire of life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 2:32 PM
Lovely, romantic haiku! Best regards. Pandita
Brewer Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 3:52 PM
Many thanks, Pandita
George   Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Wonderful Haiku, Geoffrey.
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May 16, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Thank you Elaine.
Allison Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 6:42 PM
so beautiful a haiku Geoffrey good luck if this is for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Brewer Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Thanks Jan
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