Jamie Pan Poet Rhyme

My Love For You

Your beauty is like mesmerising twirls of dancing butterflies,
your dazzling eyes are oceans reflecting Spring’s brilliant azure skies,
your radiant smile is comparable to a blooming rose so sweet,
just the sight of you knocks me off my feet.
Your billowing hair glistened like slanted beams of sunlight,
only you can brighten up my mood in a dark and sombre night,
forever in my heart is where you will be,
nobody else can enter because you are the only key. 

Date: 17th of January 2017
Contest type: Premiere contest
Contest name: Contest 264 Any form, any topic max of 8 lines
Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Jan Allison January 21, 2017 at 6:23 PM oh so romantic Jamie I did enjoy your rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx Jamie Pan January 21, 2017 at 10:46 PM Thank you Jan! :)

Constance La France January 17, 2017 at 1:24 PM Jamie this very beautifully penned. Soup mail. Jamie Pan January 17, 2017 at 5:31 PM Thank you! Soup mail.

Probir Gupta January 17, 2017 at 6:30 AM Beautifully romantic ... Jamie Pan January 17, 2017 at 7:24 AM Thank you! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2017 at 3:53 AM - True love, Jamie .... a beautiful poem - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jamie Pan January 17, 2017 at 3:55 AM Thank you so much Anne-Lise, much appreciated. By the way, do you have any comments which you think may improve this poem?