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My Love For You

Your beauty is like mesmerising twirls of dancing butterflies, your dazzling eyes are oceans reflecting Spring’s brilliant azure skies, your radiant smile is comparable to a blooming rose so sweet, just the sight of you knocks me off my feet. Your billowing hair glistened like slanted beams of sunlight, only you can brighten up my mood in a dark and sombre night, forever in my heart is where you will be, nobody else can enter because you are the only key. Date: 17th of January 2017 Contest type: Premiere contest Contest name: Contest 264 Any form, any topic max of 8 lines Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/21/2017 6:23:00 PM
oh so romantic Jamie I did enjoy your rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/21/2017 10:46:00 PM
Thank you Jan! :)
Date: 1/17/2017 1:24:00 PM
Jamie this very beautifully penned. Soup mail.
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Date: 1/17/2017 5:31:00 PM
Thank you! Soup mail.
Date: 1/17/2017 6:30:00 AM
Beautifully romantic ...
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Date: 1/17/2017 7:24:00 AM
Thank you! :)
Date: 1/17/2017 3:53:00 AM
- True love, Jamie .... a beautiful poem - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/17/2017 3:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise, much appreciated. By the way, do you have any comments which you think may improve this poem?

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