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My Love For You

( MY LOVE FOR YOU ) My love for you is like a summer rose; Always blooming, hardly dying. My love for you is like a newborn kitten; Cautious, yet soft and sweet. My love for you is like a well-written book; You can open it again and again. My love for you is wide as the ocean and deep as the sea. My love for you is everlasting, Always patient, and true to thee. (c) Jasmine Paul 11-22-2014

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Skat A

Date: 5/6/2016 10:06:00 PM

Jasmine Cruz, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2016 5:56:00 PM

jasmine, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~

Ralph Sergi

Date: 12/30/2015 1:43:00 PM

A beautiful description on the strength of love. Happy New Year!

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/20/2015 11:09:00 AM

The repetitive use of the phrase "My love for you" strengthens the message of this poem. This use of repetition is successful in this application and sets the mood for this poem as one of great love. Well done. Emile. #7

Fatima Nusairat

Date: 12/1/2014 7:15:00 PM

Nice writing :) Jasmine Thanks for visiting my page and for nice comment.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/22/2014 12:57:00 AM

I loved the way you kept the repetition about love going that gave it more strengh to your poem, Jasmine. Nice flow! :) love and hugs! xxxx D.