Jasmine Cruz Poet Free verse

My Love For You

( MY LOVE FOR YOU )

My love for you is like a summer rose;
Always blooming, hardly dying.
My love for you is like a newborn kitten;
Cautious, yet soft and sweet.

My love for you is like a well-written book;
You can open it again and again.
My love for you is wide as the ocean and deep as the sea.
My love for you is everlasting,
Always patient, and true to thee.







(c) Jasmine Paul 11-22-2014

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Skat A May 6, 2016 at 10:06 PM Jasmine Cruz, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A April 26, 2016 at 5:56 PM jasmine, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~

Ralph Sergi December 30, 2015 at 1:43 PM A beautiful description on the strength of love. Happy New Year!

Emile Pinet February 20, 2015 at 11:09 AM The repetitive use of the phrase "My love for you" strengthens the message of this poem. This use of repetition is successful in this application and sets the mood for this poem as one of great love. Well done. Emile. #7

Fatima Nusairat December 1, 2014 at 7:15 PM Nice writing :) Jasmine Thanks for visiting my page and for nice comment.

Dorian Petersen Potter November 22, 2014 at 12:57 AM I loved the way you kept the repetition about love going that gave it more strengh to your poem, Jasmine. Nice flow! :) love and hugs! xxxx D.