My Love For You

A pure arousing freshness
Streams through the ocean air,
Crispy icey fingers surrround
The rain pulsates against
Pale fog  fondly caresses
White caps ram down 
Darken caves,
spray splashes the walls
shuttery waves drifts up 
and around the smooth
curves,
water swells in the hollowness
floam slides away
evening night feathery
floats down upon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 26, 2009 at 6:54 AM
Thank you for sharing and giving us the pleasure of reading your splendid poetry today. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors where ever they may lead you. Love, Carol
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