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My Love D Ones a Sad and Beautiful Love Story

i would love to pull you down from the stars engrave your memories in my skin so my souls is reminded of all the beautiful remnants, particles you have left behind and passed on so that there may breathe new life creating space sacred space holy space for the unseen to be seen through the seeds that float through the wind to be then felt hope in aweness breath in the hope new breath new life as it passes once it creates so many it unwinds and connects from each unseen to see to feel it stays within me like a warm breeze swiftly and softly passing by and through it is you... it is you...

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Date: 10/23/2023 1:51:00 PM
A wish we share for lost loved ones, well done Jody, you are an authentic poet! quite lyrical!
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Date: 9/21/2023 5:09:00 AM
Very sweet Jody. Losing people will never get easier
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Jody Mckinnon
Date: 9/22/2023 12:10:00 PM
Hi Tom! I know it! Thank you ??
Date: 9/17/2023 11:12:00 AM
You had me at that opening line.. a deeply emotive poem with poetic introspection.. you take the reader on a real personal journey here..
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Jody Mckinnon
Date: 9/17/2023 12:40:00 PM
Hi silent one! Thanks for taking your time to post that intellectual and thoughtful comment.. :) it’s something we can all relate to. The loss of one’s we have loved from this physical world into the other. Tears were spilling as I wrote and as I thought of my grandparents and uncles and how as children we don’t know enough to hold each memory precious. Sometimes I just want another word, another hug, another visit. Lest I honor them with a written memoir. ??

Book: Shattered Sighs