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My Love An Anacreontic Couplet Work

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Like a pale red running rose Are the cheeks of my love, his nose After he has walked a mile Thinking of me all the while At the opened door a kiss His heart melts with the sheer bliss Then the children gather round Screams, laughter, those joyous sounds Hugs and kisses, lets go play Hopes of sex, delayed that day

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/2/2024 2:49:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Meanwhile, I greet you with a Joyous New Year with this prayer from the Bible in Numbers 6:24-26, "The Lord bless thee, and keep thee: The Lord make his face shine upon thee, and be gracious unto thee: The Lord lift up his countenance upon thee, and give thee peace."

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2024 4:08:00 AM

Thanks for the blessing from the Bible. Very similar to an Irish blessing which probably came from a slight variation of the Bible. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 12/31/2023 6:37:00 AM

A poem on family ties and the bond between husband and wife. To have an active and joyous family time, sometimes the couple will have to make some sacrifices. Love the image of a happy family that you have painted dear Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/31/2023 7:51:00 AM

Valsa, most family experience those days from time to time, but life is like that some days go better than others. Thanks for your support by reading and commenting on my works. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/30/2023 9:55:00 AM

This is a wonderful Anacreontic couplet, dear Sara, those rhymes are truly resplendent and create a mellifluous flow for lines. How family time brings bliss and when its prioritised for kids.. A beautiful ambience of cheerful aura is created here.. Enjoyed reading this, sending you love & light ~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/30/2023 11:33:00 AM

Your comments are uplifting and encouraging, Hiya. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 12/30/2023 1:54:00 AM

Dear Sara, you always convey thoughts that readers can resonate with. Especially married couples when children are around, how sometimes they need to prioritize for kids sake. I love the rhymes and how heartfelt this is too. So well written couplets. Pleasure reading your work. Best wishes for the contest , if it is for the contest

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/30/2023 5:21:00 AM

IE, yes, life gives us those times that we have to delay gratification for the children's sake. Thank you for your kind review of my work. Sara K

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/29/2023 3:28:00 PM

So tender and adorable is the voice of your poem, Sara. Love resonates throughout. Splendidly done.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/30/2023 5:19:00 AM

Why, thank you, Vijay. Thank you for your review it is uplifting. Sara K

Tonye George

Date: 12/29/2023 10:05:00 AM

I love those double rhymes at the end. What a lovely piece Sara, I love the way you bring your work to life. I love the happiness and laughter that comes with it, family, love and everything. Compliments of the season.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/29/2023 1:30:00 PM

Thank you for the nice review of my work and compliments of the season, Tonye. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 12/29/2023 8:06:00 AM

this is lovely and refreshing, enjoyed meilleurs voeux 2024

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/29/2023 1:22:00 PM

I hope the New Year is great for you and your family as well, Yann. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/29/2023 6:06:00 AM

Sara, that is so true. The fondness and intimacy we might wish to have sometimes takes a back seat to other types of play. At least it's play that interrupts in this scenario. Not so bad really. Just very human.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/29/2023 1:21:00 PM

I remember those days when children had to have their attention, Duke, even though sometimes it seems like eons ago. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/29/2023 5:30:00 AM

Nothing beats family and loved ones as for the sex, there's always tommorow or even the next day lol. If it's for a contest, good luck. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/29/2023 1:20:00 PM

Why, thank you, Tom. Yes, family is so important even though the world tries to make it to not be so. Thank you for stopping by. Sara K