Sara Kendrick Poet Couplet

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My Love An Anacreontic Couplet Work

Like a pale red running rose
Are the cheeks of my love, his nose
After he has walked a mile
Thinking of me all the while
At the opened door a kiss
His heart melts with the sheer bliss
Then the children gather round
Screams, laughter, those joyous sounds
Hugs and kisses, lets go play
Hopes of sex, delayed that day

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Beata Agustin January 2, 2024 at 2:49 AM Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Meanwhile, I greet you with a Joyous New Year with this prayer from the Bible in Numbers 6:24-26, "The Lord bless thee, and keep thee: The Lord make his face shine upon thee, and be gracious unto thee: The Lord lift up his countenance upon thee, and give thee peace." Sara Kendrick January 2, 2024 at 4:08 AM Thanks for the blessing from the Bible. Very similar to an Irish blessing which probably came from a slight variation of the Bible. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Valsa George December 31, 2023 at 6:37 AM A poem on family ties and the bond between husband and wife. To have an active and joyous family time, sometimes the couple will have to make some sacrifices. Love the image of a happy family that you have painted dear Sara. Sara Kendrick December 31, 2023 at 7:51 AM Valsa, most family experience those days from time to time, but life is like that some days go better than others. Thanks for your support by reading and commenting on my works. Sara K

Hiya Sharma December 30, 2023 at 9:55 AM This is a wonderful Anacreontic couplet, dear Sara, those rhymes are truly resplendent and create a mellifluous flow for lines. How family time brings bliss and when its prioritised for kids.. A beautiful ambience of cheerful aura is created here.. Enjoyed reading this, sending you love & light ~ Sara Kendrick December 30, 2023 at 11:33 AM Your comments are uplifting and encouraging, Hiya. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Ink Empress December 30, 2023 at 1:54 AM Dear Sara, you always convey thoughts that readers can resonate with. Especially married couples when children are around, how sometimes they need to prioritize for kids sake. I love the rhymes and how heartfelt this is too. So well written couplets. Pleasure reading your work. Best wishes for the contest , if it is for the contest Sara Kendrick December 30, 2023 at 5:21 AM IE, yes, life gives us those times that we have to delay gratification for the children's sake. Thank you for your kind review of my work. Sara K

Vijay Pandit December 29, 2023 at 3:28 PM So tender and adorable is the voice of your poem, Sara. Love resonates throughout. Splendidly done. Sara Kendrick December 30, 2023 at 5:19 AM Why, thank you, Vijay. Thank you for your review it is uplifting. Sara K

Tonye George December 29, 2023 at 10:05 AM I love those double rhymes at the end. What a lovely piece Sara, I love the way you bring your work to life. I love the happiness and laughter that comes with it, family, love and everything. Compliments of the season. Sara Kendrick December 29, 2023 at 1:30 PM Thank you for the nice review of my work and compliments of the season, Tonye. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Yann Rolland December 29, 2023 at 8:06 AM this is lovely and refreshing, enjoyed meilleurs voeux 2024 Sara Kendrick December 29, 2023 at 1:22 PM I hope the New Year is great for you and your family as well, Yann. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Duke Beaufort December 29, 2023 at 6:06 AM Sara, that is so true. The fondness and intimacy we might wish to have sometimes takes a back seat to other types of play. At least it's play that interrupts in this scenario. Not so bad really. Just very human. Sara Kendrick December 29, 2023 at 1:21 PM I remember those days when children had to have their attention, Duke, even though sometimes it seems like eons ago. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Tom Cunningham December 29, 2023 at 5:30 AM Nothing beats family and loved ones as for the sex, there's always tommorow or even the next day lol. If it's for a contest, good luck. Tom Sara Kendrick December 29, 2023 at 1:20 PM Why, thank you, Tom. Yes, family is so important even though the world tries to make it to not be so. Thank you for stopping by. Sara K