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My Love

MY LOVE*****
My tussle with nature will be fruitless
If not for that, I will fight for a millenia
Just to spend my life with you
I will make our love awestruck for your progeny
And posterity will make us a monument
To hail always till the end of time
Because a facsimile of our love will be impossible
Romeo and juliet will be exchange with our names
And the act of Delaila will be extinct
Trust will be our backbone
Faithfulness will be our weapon
And loyalty will always sheild us
Seldom will there be fighting or quarreling
Because of our perfection
Which strengthens our affection

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Skat A July 28, 2015 at 8:36 PM Derrick, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

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